After yesterday's comment about naff reviewers, today I have received a review with some really constructive suggestions, like increase the dialogue, and give more prominence to Mrs S. I'll work on the first, but I'm not so sure about the second. I don't want her getting ideas above her station.
Today is mostly a Lions day. Not just one but two Housing Society meetings this morning, and a dinner meeting this evening. I had hoped to be taking a couple of guests, one or both of whom would make good Lions, but they already had something else on. Next month maybe.